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River rushing below bluffs
River rushing below bluffs River rushing below bluffs written July 7th, 2021 I dream of the bluffs we visited that day river rushing below demarcating freedom these years of practicing flying away across fields in preparation for this night have made my wings strong can I reach the bluffs? float out over the river below? escape these fields and rows encompassing my life I fly towards my future until wings collapse trembling on the edge of becoming or breaking into pieces I fall to the ground Not to the bluffs and river rushing below not this time but one night soon with these wings made strong. |
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Growing up amidst the cornfields of rural Illinois, and the bluffs along the Mississippi River. That line about "wings made strong" was in another poem, but the poem didn't achieve what I wanted. Maybe this one comes closer.
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7/19/2021 8:01 am |
I used to live right up the river from you in rural Wisconsin about 30 miles from the Cities. Beautiful country.
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I like that!!!!!
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very descriptive. almost feel like i'm with you
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This is so beautiful Sen. *. *. *
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Have no fear I'm am here Land in my arms You will not be harmed Hold onto me Till you wings set you free Come back to me Out by the sea Fly away Come back so day The water still flows And our love grows One never know What can be found When you land on my ground Xoxoxoxo thank you for my Birthday Poam
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