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Pieces
Pieces Pieces written December 5th, 2020 _______ things broken in pieces not finding peace ________ shattered glass shards reflect the sun ________ minnows dart through shallow streams as bright sun pierces _________ |
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I like these. More "not haiku".
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so descriptive. love it
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This reminds me of the state of broken that humans reside in, along with the perpetual motion of life, and how there is an energy source that is infused into it all. There is a perspective that existence is an unfolding from a mind and a returning to that mind. This harkens to the idea of being broken and ever moving toward harmony and completion. Cool write! *. *. *
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Very nice not-haikus, particularly first and second. . Ultima publicacion: (16/FEB ) Ser agua Puedes contactarme en MI BUZON o q:1642318, o fuera donde dice mi buzon
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Fradgle Handle with care May be broke but still around Can be replaced if wanted Or move on Clean up so you don't get hurt
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Are these three seperate ideas or one piece? Either way, i applaud the creativity My name is MrWrong and I approved this comment
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